February 2005 : Feature

Guest Columnist: Yvonne Blomer

Elizabeth Bishop

12 O'Clock News

gooseneck lamp As you all know, tonight is the night of the full
moon, half the world over. But here the moon
seems to hang motionless in the sky. It gives very
little light; it could be dead. Visibility is poor.
Nevertheless, we shall try to give you some idea of
the lay of the land and the present situation.
typewriter The escapement that rises abruptly from the central
plain is in heavy shadow, but the elaborate terrac-
ing of its southern glacis gleams faintly in the dim
light, like fish scales. What endless labor those
small, peculiarly shaped terraces represent! And
yet, on them the welfare of this tiny principality
depends.
pile of mss. A slight landslide occurred in the northwest about
an hour ago. The exposed soil appears to be of poor
quality: almost white, calcareous, and shaly. There
are believed to have been no casualties.
typed sheet Almost due north, our aerial reconnaissance reports
the discovery of a large rectangular ‘field’, hitherto
unknown to us, obviously man-made. It is dark-
speckled. An airstrip? A cemetery?
envelopes In this small, backward country, one of the most
backward left in the world today, communications
are crude and “industrialization” and its products
almost nonexistent. Strange to say, however, sign-
boards are on a truly gigantic scale.
ink-bottle We have also received reports of a mysterious, oddly
shaped, black structure, at an undisclosed distance
to the east. Its presence was revealed only because
its highly polished surface catches such feeble
moonlight as prevails. The natural resources of the
country being far from completely known to us,
there is the possibility that this may be, or may
contain, some powerful and terrifying “secret
weapon”. On the other hand, given what we do
know, or have learned from our anthropologists
and sociologists about this people, it may well be
nothing more than a numen, or a great altar
recently erected to one of their gods, to which, in
their present historical state of superstition and
helplessness, they attribute magical power, and
may even regard as a “savior,” one last hope of
rescue from their grave difficulties.
typewriter
eraser
At last! One of the elusive natives has been spotted!
He appears to be—rather, to have been—a
unicyclist-courier, who may have met his end by
falling from the height of the escarpment because
of the deceptive illumination. Alive, he would have
been small, but undoubtedly proud and erect, with
the thick, bristling black hair typical of the
indigenes.
ashtray From our superior vantage point, we can clearly see
into a sort of dugout, possibly a shell crater, a “nest”
of soldiers. They lie heaped together, wearing the
camouflage “battle dress” intended for “winter war-
fare”. They are in hideously contorted position, all
dead. We can make out at least eight bodies. These
uniforms were designed to be used in guerilla
warfare on the country's one snow-covered moun-
tain peak. The fact that these poor soldiers are
wearing them here, on the plain, gives further
proof, if proof were necessary, either of the childish-
ness and hopeless impracticality of this inscrutable
people, our opponents, or of the sad corruption of their
leaders.
From The Completer Poems: 1927-1979 , by Elizabeth Bishop.
Copyright © 1979, 1983 by Alice Helen Methfessel.
Used by permission of Farrar, Straus and Giroux, LLC.
All rights reserved.1. See book.

The Mass Media and the Writer
in Elizabeth Bishop’s 12 O’Clock News

Elizabeth Bishop was born in Worcester, Massachusetts. After her father’s death, when she was less than a year old, her mother entered a sanitarium and Elizabeth lived with her mother’s family in Great Village, NS. She had poor health during her childhood and spent much of her time reading, writing poetry and playing the piano.

In the poem, “12 O’Clock News”, Bishop looks at our ability to feel alienated from the world around us, even when that world is occupied by familiar objects.

Each object on the left and each description on the right works in interplay between object and image to create metaphor. The objects from her desk are metaphors for the descriptions that go with them, but the descriptions are also metaphors for the objects, for the wider world, the mass media and the writer herself. Bishop builds from the light (i.e. her gooseneck lamp) and works outward to show all the objects that are illuminated and what they are capable of being.

The poem can be read as a commentary on the mass media and how it portrays foreign landscapes. During the early part of the Iraqi war the grey-green surveillance footage depicted an alien world in a way that could only heighten the viewer’s sense that Iraq is different and its people “in the dark”.

Similarly, in the first stanza of “12 O’Clock News”, Bishop compares the dim light her reading lamp gives to the light emitted by the moon. She writes, “tonight is the night of the full moon, half the world over,” which has something in common with where the reader is, while the place the ‘reporter’ is in is different, less illuminated. In fact, the reporter suggests that the moon where she is “could be dead”, reinforcing the contrast between being in the light and knowing, and being in the dark and not knowing.

In an essay on “12 O’Clock News”, Karen Lee argues that Bishop wants to question our trust of perceived truths (“Clouded Perceptions in Elizabeth Bishop’s ‘12 O’clock News’”). In questioning these perceptions, Bishop highlights the different ways we see the world based on how familiar we are with a place, or object. Because the reporter in the poem can not see well, her perceptions are thrown off. However, she still makes judgments: “In this small, backward country, one of the most backward left in the world today.”

In addition to providing a commentary on mass media, Bishop, as a writer, bestows symbolic value on the seven objects in “12 O’Clock News”. From the mechanics of the lamp and typewriter grows the pile of manuscripts that, in turn, brings about the typed sheets and envelopes. The objects combine to create a landscape as well as a sense of writerly progression.

Her typewriter is the very thing that her welfare, as the “tiny principality”, depends upon; her manuscripts form a landslide whose soil is of poor quality. Each typed sheet is either an airstrip or a cemetery, and envelopes, either that she sends letters to friends or that she sends her poems out into the world in, are crude forms of communication.

The ink bottle takes on indescribable religious power. The idea of it as a savior, to the poet, as the “last hope of rescue” from her “grave difficulties” is literal and figurative. Bishop is living off her writing, but also the act of writing is mysterious and only meaningful if illuminated in some way, if understood.

The “ashtray” stanza shows several “soldiers” in a heap, “all dead”. They are ineffective and there is little in the way of sorrow at their deaths. We’ve been set up not to empathize with the people in this foreign place.

Bishop presents us with items and a description of those items that allows for more than one reading: she shows both their proximity and distance. But she is as cool and calculating in describing these objects as a reporter would be showing war. In doing so, Bishop makes not only the news media culpable but also the act of writing�and thus the poet herself.


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Yvonne Blomer’s poetry has won awards and been published in Canadian literary journals, in addition to being in the upcoming anthology In Fine Form: An Anthology of Canadian Form Poetry. She lives in the UK where she is doing her MA in Creative Writing at the University of East Anglia.

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